Pluviam, a child of the planet Spes, stood alone in the shifting sands of this once great city, awaiting his destiny. He was the planets hope for the future, as so many of the children before him. He had been raised, trained and tested for this moment. Two days ago he had been judged to be the prime receiver of the Gift and since then had spent his time in prayer and fasting to be a worthy vessel. He wondered if he would succeed and be able to share the Gift with his planet, or would he be reduced to ashes, another failed candidate.
Rain had stopped falling on the planet countless generations ago. The lakes had dried up, plant life had withdrawn deep into the earth, seeking moisture and protecting its seeds. The planet had become a desert, the inhabitants surviving only by constant drilling to find untapped sources of water beneath the planets surface. But these limited resources were dwindling and people were starting to die.
Once a year the planet entered into its solar eclipse. At that moment in time all other planets in the solar system came into perfect alignment, unleashing a great cosmic force that funneled into a specific area of Spes. Pluviam now occupied that spot, waiting for the occultation to begin.
He saw the moons body slowly creep across the sun. The planet darkened and remembering his training he opened his awareness to the cosmos. He prayed to the creator of the universe that he would be a worthy vessel to except the gift. He humbled himself and begged for life for his planet and its peoples. Casting out all extraneous thoughts, he centred himself, concentrating on being a willing sacrifice to bring the planet in harmony with the cosmos once more.
A tingling sensation started running through his body. A shiver of ecstasy followed as he became one with the universe. His minds eye saw a path winding through the centre of the alignment, disappearing into a glowing flame. The flame flared, running along the path, reaching out to him, warming his body. The love for his planet and his people expanded to include the whole of creation, as his body continued to be consumed by the flame. His body no longer able to contain this living flame of love, gifted by the Creator, shattered into a million fragments and ascended into the stratosphere.
He, who was once Pluviam, looked down upon his planet, viewed its desolation and misery and became full of sorrow. He wept and his tears flowed, turning the desert to mud, filling the lakes and beckoning the seeds that long lay dormant to reach once more for the surface.
What a stunning story, Len. I was touched by the beauty of your words and the grace of the transformation. Thanks so much for your story. I can’t wait to share it. 🙂 ❤
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Thanks Diana. You came up with a great prompt to stir the imagination.
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Great story. What a sad ending though. I hope people here on Earth learn to channel that energy without burning up – our planet needs it.
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Thanks Suzanne. Sometimes sacrifice is required in order to do good things.
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You have given us such a beautiful and deeply spiritual story. The tears of the chosen,
of Pluviam , as he shattered into millions of fragments when the love could no longer contain him.
Thus raining healing tears on Earth.
miriam
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Thank you Miriam. It was my Lenten theme. One dying for the many.
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Brave kid. I can’t help wishing that the Creator could have made it rain without Pluviam having to be busted to bits, but it was ever thus. Beautifully written, Len.
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Thanks Jane. Death and rebirth. It is ever thus.
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🙂
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Lovely story. Only someone of a spiritual nature can write such awareness of the mind when they are free to express themselves.
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Good on ya Susan. Thanks for commenting little sister.
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Well done! 🙂
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Thanks for the compliment and visiting.
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Really good, Len!
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Thanks Chelsea. I found the image fascinating.
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A wonderful story from Len. I hope you enjoy the read. 🙂
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Nicely done . . . sad and beautiful.
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Thanks for visiting Priscilla and your kind comments.
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That was AWESOME!
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Thanks for visiting Kevin and your kind comment.
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My pleasure!
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Such a beautiful and uplifting story! Very well done! 🙂
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Thanks for visiting and your kind words.
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You’re totally welcome! 🙂
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A beautiful take on the prompt. Your story of sacrifice and unconditional love is profound.
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Thanks for your kind comments and for visiting.
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Nicely done, Len!
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Thanks for visiting Jill.
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This is a wonderful story and response to Diana’s prompt. I love that it is heartwarming, creative, and no battles!
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Thanks for your kind comments Brad. I am ever the optimist. I just read the bio on your blog site and agree wholeheartedly with your sentiments.
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Thank you Len. I look forward to sharing stories and inspiration.
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Awesome!
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Thanks Ethan and for visiting.
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Reblogged this on anita dawes and jaye marie.
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Well penned. The story will linger in my mind tonight.
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Thanks for visiting and your kind comment.
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The threads of your faith are so interwoven in the telling of this story Len. Beautifully done.
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Thanks for your kind comments Violet.
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He proved himself worthy of his gift in the most loving way.
I very much enjoyed reading your story. 🙂
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Thanks for your kind comments Barbara……and yes he did, he found his purpose.
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Very transformational tale, and one worthy of being published within a book – hopefully full-length. It is a splendid story of sacrificing oneself to a greater cause that will bring so much to so many. Love your writing. Thank you for sharing it.
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Thank you for your kind words Anne.
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It’s a beautiful story and your told it well.
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Thanks for the compliment.
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I loved this story, Len. It is really touching, and bears the sensitivity to the planet that we on earth now need to have and use before it is too late. Thank you kindly.
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Thanks for your kind comment Anne.
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